By Learning English, Paragraphs

through self-study. With my knowledge, I have been able to create commercial web sites for my father's business of selling apartments and my uncle's business of XXXX. By having professional web sites, their businesses have enjoyed increased awareness and business. Javascript, HTML, CSS, ASP,...

Good Morning MH, look at the essay where I spent 2 days for rewriting, thinking, re-editing. But I am still not satisified. I was born in Morocco on January 26, 1986, in the city of Rabat, the Capital of the Kingdom of Morocco. I have a mother and father as well as a younger brother and an...

Hi, Yes, most people who are learning English would not get that question. What the author means by "flow" is the layout. Does the house "flow" nicely from one room to the next? Is it well organized? Does the functionality and transition make sense? It is similar to an essay that "flows"...

HI, sorry to have been late to answer, I had some intrnet connexion problems. anyway here is the still-need-to-be-worked essay: I was born in Morocco on January 26, 1986, in the city of Rabat, the Capital of the Kingdom of Morocco. I have a mother and father as well as a younger brother George...

I was born in Morocco on January 26, 1986, in the city of Rabat, the Capital of the Kingdom of Morocco. I have a mother and father as well as a younger brother George by X years and an older sister Sally by four years. George is in high school, and Sally is studying architecture at University...

Hi Soufiane, Don't worry about the word count. We can always cut. Besides, SUNY doesn't have a word count This is what I mean by cleaning it up. I just did a spell check and caught the obvious errors and gave better spacing to your paragraphs and sentences. I still need to do some other...

Hi yohooo8, Here are the edited versions of your two blogs. I really have started enjoying editing your blogs. Some as these are so interesting! and all of them are funny! Regarding helping you with writing, though I do not feel qualified to give you any suggestions ( the...