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Hi, Heres my essay, any critiques are welcom. Basically i need someone to edit (spelling, gremmar, ect.). Also tell me what you think about it. is this a good addmisions essay? I have no idea what an Institute like this expects from applicants. However, to me this is a very good essay. You...

I have tried to correct the mistakes you underlined, and have changed some other things. Could you please look if everything is correct? (I really do not know how I can rephraze the sentence I underlined in the introduction paragraph) Cosmetic surgery: a miracle worker? A study by Psychology...

Cosmetic surgery: a miracle worker? A study by Psychology Today magazine shows that many people are not satisfied with their looks: 60,000,000 do not like their noses; 30,000,000 do not like their chins; 6,000,000 do not like their ears and another 6,000,000 do not like their eyes. Only...

Could someone please help me with this argumentative essay? I have to write an argumentative essay against cosmetic surgery. Could someone please look if there are mistakes (grammar mistakes, vocabulary mistakes, logical mistakes), if the text is well-structured, if everything in the text is...

Heres my essay, any critiques are welcom. Basically i need someone to edit (spelling, gremmar, ect.). Also tell me what you think about it. is this a good addmisions essay? Thank you My whole life I never felt like I could relate to anybody. Growing up I was always thinking about the future,...

Basically, I have been set a piece of coursework: to compare the aforementioned poems. I am going for an A* piece at GCSE level, there is no particular question, just to compare the four poems. I have almost completed My Last Duchess, mentioning all the themes I can think of and reading the...

Hi, My first reaction is that you have a huge number of tiny paragraphs, mostly just one or too sentences. To write an English-style essay, you need a smaller number of longer paragraphs. Each paragraph should introduce and discuss one of your main points. I suggest that you revise your work...

hi everyone ,,this is my essay i have to submit it on thursday ,,i need a grammer check on it ,, and ideas ,i have 3 conclusion whic one is better ?? c1 or c2 or c3do my introduction have a good funnel method ? or need improvment !!--please help me :) and thank you Learning Japanese Have...

 Hi, can you please correct any grammatical errors? I will appreciate it. Thank you!  Histories and GenealogiesMicrowave oven: Can we cook with this?   Our life is so busy that we do not have enough time to cook, or we have a great excuse to be lazy when it comes to cooking. After the advent of...

dear all..i really need your help in checking my essay. i am worst in english ang this is my first trial in argumentative essay.hope got ur attention.thank a lot! Should Malaysian Universities implement the open book examination? Open book examination (OBE) had been an...