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Hi, It's all perfectly understandable but not all of it sounds natural or is grammatical. I've highlighted parts that are not grammatical in red, incorrect word choices in blue, and just 'not how a native speaker would put it' in yellow. I've made a few corrections to the early part in red...

Yoong Liat wrote: Starget1 wrote: Hello all, How can I improve my writing skills so that it's widely understood by everyone, particularly, native American and English speakers. Because I've written a simple newsletter and was told that English speakers do not understand some of my phrases....

Could someone do a favor and check up my rough letters. I'm looking forward to your corrections and advice. Future plans. First of all I’d like to stress that I do not intend to change my career direction dramatically. I’ve made my mind to focus on Accountancy and Financial Management. I...

Hi Sara, I've made a number of changes, so please read carefully. You sound like an extremely confident person (which is an asset). Good luck with this. Write again if you need more help. Best wishes, Clive put your full address in top right corner Milan, 28 August 2006 Dear Mr, Schmidt...

You again misunderstood me. But I think this confusion stems from understaning of the term politics. I tried to say even such an organization which doesnt have to do anything regarding to this case (an historical event) can make decisions because of the diaspora.As for Sub-Commission on the...

'Walking the beat' is the basic foot patrol police do, and it is the 'lowest' role in the service. all new police officers have to start off by walking the beat for a number of years before they can apply for a promotion or to enter into a specialism. These two are more advanced police,...

Malaysia, Labuan, 22 May 2006 7CREATION.COM announced new features to enhance and improve the graphic marketing experience. These new 7Creation features advance the state of the art in marketing by helping the participants worldwide to vote and share their participating graphics and...

This is my first essay. Your suggestions on how to improve it are most welcome. Rejuvenating the Indian Police System A typical policeman, in most developed countries, would instill a sense of security in one’s mind, exhibit honesty, confidence and last but not the least discipline. In...

It is difficult that we understand how students in one class enhanced their intellectual levels, and probably it depends on a teacher who teaches the students, but it is scarcely an affirmative opinion, because there is not an exact criterion for it. Where I live, in Japan, the sarary of the...

FRAUD FRAUD FRAUD MICROSOFT EMAIL LOTTERY INTERNATIONAL / WORLD INTERNET LOTTO CENTRE AMSTERDAM FROM: INTERNATIONAL PROMOTION / PRIZE AWARD DEPT. PROMOTING INTERNET USAGE OVER THE GLOBE ( WE ENCOURAGE GLOBALIZATION)REF:...