thank you for your suggestins I have to write all of these in just one paragraph. Isn't my writing enough or what do you think about that?

Hi, In my opinion, you need to be more direct and, as you suggest, more focused on yourself. Try this. Write this again in the form of a series of paragraphs starting with 'I want to do this traineeship because . . . . ' Put

Hi, Here are a few suggestions. Structure it like an esaay. Paragraph 1 introduction say what degree you are applying for Paragraph 2 Say why you want to do that degree in that field Paragraph 3 Say why

thanks but I was talking about the first paragraph thing? thanks again douglewis.

In my opinion, as he talks about urine and faeces, "repugnant" would be a more accurate mean of vile; but also could mean "lowly" and "corruptible". So all of these "lowly" "corruptible" and

In my opinion, as he talks about urine and faeces, "repugnant" would be a more accurate mean of vile; but also could mean "lowly" and "corruptible". All the phrase highlighted in colour seems to be St.

Hi. Thanks for the answer. What about " lowly " and " corruptible "? What are the meanings of these here? Does " in St.Augustine's phrase " mean that probably the words "In the faeces and urine of

1- Yes, it does, but i'm afraid that with "vile" he means "repugnant", not "inmoral" or "bad". 2- Yes, that's seems to be the meaning. 3- "The lure of her beatuy" was an aspect of the death

Hi I'd like to ask you about the passage below: As Marina Warner writes, “In this battle between the flesh and the spirit, the female sex was firmly placed on the side of the flesh.” Since menstruation, breastfeeding and

OK thanks , and for the withdrawal paragraph had would you say it? and is it overnighted or done overnight, how would you say? thanks