Below is a sentence included in a personal statement I am writing or grad school. I can't figure out how to structure the bolded area. Do I place a comma there (I'm worried that this sentence has too many commas already), should I use the

Response to "Why do you want to pursue a career in the medical field?" My personal statement is not complete yet...I will then go on to tell why specifically I want to become a doctor. I am not very happy with what I cultivated so

Hi all Please review my personal statement and tell me if there are any mistakes in it. My interest in law began with fatness. As a child, I was the fattest kid in the school consequently I used to get annoyed by stronger healthier kids and I had

Hi All I had introduction meeting with a customer's manger, and I prepared a follow up thank you letter: Dear xyz it was a big pleasure to have this fruitiness meeting with you. and in case you needed any support or have any issues you should

Motivation Letter! Hey!I need some help!I have to write a personal statement of my goals (essay min 1 page of my career inspiration).I am applying for Master Degree ,with major violin.I will be really appreciate ,if you help with some example

How can I get a point of view on my personal statement? Do i need to post it or send an inbox to the forum??

Hi Mralzaabi, Welcome to the forums. Have you had a look at the UCAS's website ? You'll find a lot of suggestions there on how to write the statement you need. They give advice on the following points: Key points to consider What to

Hi, everybody! I have writen the draft of my personal statement for graduate program. Can anybody help to check it,and correct the mistakes? Thank you very mucn! 1. Academic backgrounds: During the years of undergraduate education, I have taken

Hi, I'm applying for a scholarship and i was asked why i think i'm a particularly suitable candidate as part of my personal statement.Awards are said to be based on academic merit.Do i just mention my academic grades and awards or how do i

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