By Tenses, Paragraphs

.I have underlined some problem areas:hi everyone, can u guys please this paragraph for me? I really need to fix this paragraph to pass my engllish class. So please help me to check my grammar. Thanks in advanceIn the letter written by Ernesto Meza to city of Stockton, he tells about his concerns...

An Anonymous' s post on the subject of the ' difference between 'can' and ' able ' contains a post thread (#354509 ) in which Mister Micawber says that 'can' and ' be able to ' have the same meaning and instructs the main poster to use ' I can't...

Actually I don't have problem with the last sentence. In fact, your suggestion works well in the last sentence. My problem is the tense switch. I know the easy way out is to stick to one tense from start to end like I did in the answers I provided (one in past tense and the other in present...

Here's my guess. I could be wrong. I would pick one tense and try to stick to it as much as possible. Sounds like you're interested in the present tense. So let's analyze it, which is my second version. David likes to joke, even with his parents (No problem. To me, it sounds like...

You need to fix the part in red.

Ok... so basically I need to do a five paragraph essay (Paragraph model?) by analyzing 3 quotes from this a passage I read "No name woman" by Maxie Hong Kingston. I'm just having trouble with a few things... some I understand, and others I don't. I tried fixing some errors that...

Mister Micawber, I would like to thank you for the explanation.However, I have found one example of the present perfect tense which used the word "now" in the British council grammar...

.There's no reason why several verb tenses-- if appropriate-- cannot appear in a single paragraph. However, I would revise yours to this:Hi Michael,I will explain what changes must be made to the source code and the extent of the changes. I have written them as clearly as I can , so that I...

This is a good paragraph and the tenses of your verbs are consistent. The only sentence that has a problem is, "We had worked together...and have always had good relationships...even after I have left... That first verb, had worked, is past perfect tense. The rest of the paragraph is...

Would you please correct this paragraph for me? I'm more concerned with tenses. Thanks. Having considered the importance of piloting my interview schedules, and bearing in mind the issue of time limitations, I decided to allocate the first week of my fieldwork to the pilot phase. The...