By Universities, Personal statements

Hi,I've literally signed up in the last 5 minutes and I know it may be a bit cheeky to ask for help in my first post, but I really am desperate. I need to finish off with a few lines for my closing statement, so any tips you can give me for that would go down excellent.Well, I am applying for a...

Hi, Thank you for your advice. I tried to organize it, this is my new personal statement. I tried to write it in the same order, but I couldn't make it to three paragraphs, as the paragraphs themself become longer. What do you think? Is this Better? Is it more organized? Should I remove a...

Hi, Thank you for your advice. I tried to organize it, this is my new personal statement. I tried to write it in the same order, but I couldn't make it to three paragraphs, as the paragraphs themself become longer. What do you think? Is this Better? Is it more organized? Should I remove a...

Hi folks, Hereunder is my personal statement for application to an university. Cud anyone do me a favor to help me check and revise? Your comment will be highly appreciated. Thanks a lot in advance! Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing this letter to apply for the Master of Business...

Yankee: Yeah, but it seems to be used so widely... Even in titles: «Man's Way. A First Book in Philosophy by Henry Van Zandt Cobb» Or, inside an apparently serious book: «This book, like every other book in philosophy, however much some writers try to pretend otherwise, is a...

Hello, My name is Patrick. I am applying to a Master's degree in Physics and I need to write a personal statement. Very exactly the application form asks for "Personal statement (your motivation for applying)" without any further indication on the length required or if it should be a letter. I...

Dear advisers, My friend is currently applying to a graduate program of one university in the U.S., so he asked me to help him on his personal statement. Please see the following work done by me and revise it if you would like to. One of the reasons that I want to apply to your program is to...

Nomination Form: Study of the U.S. Institute for Student Leaders Summer 2007 Q-Please attach a personal statement (no more than one page) that outlines why you would like to participate in this program. Indicate why you feel this program would be useful in your future career path and in...

Anonymous wrote: When I first came to the University of California, Davis, I was among hundreds of students whose future seemed unclear. Four years of high school, two years of middle school, and six years of elementary school (Flip the order around) did not help me decide what I want to do in...

When I first came to the University of California, Davis, I was among hundreds of students whose future seemed unclear. Four years of high school, two years of middle school, and six years of elementary school did not help me decide what I want to do in my future. However, everything fell...