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Dear MountainHiker or somebody, I have read a lot of different sorts of material on the internet and on this site about writing motivational letters, but it is my first experience. I have revised it, changed it and rewritten it thousand times, I need a fresh look of expert on it. I would be very...

dear Mr.Petandic i am so delighted to see your thorough comments. it is exactly what i have been expecting. i have tried a long time to modify my letter by reviewing excellent examples and following the professional advices. please feel free to give any critical or negative comments if there...

hi Mr.MH i appreciate all your valuable pointed comments. please read it for one more time if you are not busy and see whether there is something you expected because i totally rewrote it based on your specific questions....

Dear Sir or Madam, Having a flair for marketing, I wish to apply for a MA programme in marketing in September 2005. My career objective is to become a faculty member at a leading university. I have always endeavored to do my best and learn as much as possible. In 2001 after my graduation from...

Dear Mr. Moutain Hiker, Thank you very much for your time and precious suggestions. I have made some changes, especially the paragraph 4(something about my families) and the last sentence of the second last paragraph(something about my future plan). Could you please take a look? I am looking...

Dear Sir or Madam, Having a flair for marketing, I wish to apply for a MA programme in marketing in September 2005. I will be graduating with BA degree in International Business from Vaasa Polytechnic University in May 2005. My career objective is to become a faculty member at a leading...

Dear Mr. MountainHiker Thank you very much again for your time and precious suggestions. I have made some modifications. Could you please take a look again? Paragraph one is about my objective, paragraph two is about what I have learned in previous university regarding other aspects, paragraph...

Dear Mr. Mountain Hiker At first thank you very very much for your time and suggestions. I have learned a lot from that and made some modifications. Could you please help me to check it? 1.I don’t know the name of the person that I write to. 2.Paragraph one is about my objective, paragraph two...

Wang Mengjie (Ms.), First, I trust you have read the top two posts in this section of the forum? I want to be sure that you are willing to have you information available to world at large and have it remain so. Second, your essay is very chaotic. It needs some structure. You need to simplify...

Well, I don't really know at which hospital i'm gonig to stay at. It's a decision taken by the Norway National Comitee. The aim of this exchange program is to complete medical education and so they won't really get anything from my part (but my enthusiasm and desire of learning). This kind of...