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Hi, My comments are that your essay wanders too much. Or in other words, your essay needs a tighter focus. Your grammar is actually pretty good. It’s your organization of your essay where you need to apply the most attention. Try making an outline: 1) Love is a four letter word. 2) There...

Hi Dung, There are requirements from Utrecht University to finish a motivation letter: - Why would u like to study at Utrecht University? 1b & 1c & 3 - What field(s) of studies do u find most interesting and why? 1b & 1c & 3 - Do u have any any revelant working experience and social...

hank you veru much. I am not sure all the sentences are right others. General Notes: 1) Overall good. 2) You need to work on proof reading your work for missing words. It is a problem that I have too. 3) You need to be consistent in your paragraphs. It you are talking about what a...

We will likely move this paragraph up after the current second paragraph where you discuss your mathematics and science stuff. As a general comment, you need to watch your spelling.

Hi suyoung, I like Welchs grape or strawberry flavor. When i take a english class. it is alway with me ! Though it is too much to me. (actually, it's size larger than usual refreshing beverage) but I like it ! : ) Besides. its' design is so cute and sweet flavor makes me feel better ! : ) I...

LemonTree & Soufiane: Let's establish a few ground rules before we continue. 1) We work on one letter at a time. There is likely to be considerable overlap between the letters. Thus, it makes sense to work on a single letter at a time. When one letter is complete, the rest should follow very...

Hi Stephen, Your name Your club title/position Club Name Club address Date Person's name Their title/position Company name Company address Dear Mr. Person: (use a colon) A one or two line paragraph that outlines why you are writing to them. Next a 3-4 sentence paragraph on the benefits...

Essay is a type of articles to deliver ideas or opinions to readers. So, the standard of a good essay should be its capability to convey the ideas and facts accurately in an attractive way. Just like a saying says, “no one can please everybody”; to impress everyone is also beyond the ability of...

Dear Miriam, Yes. You are totally right at the very begining of your previous post. Any variants of one sentence will be annoying enough to send me to a mental house. The listings on Google are considered as for reference only. One should never buy all the the stories without any doubt in mind....

Hello, Guest. Yours is a particular type of sentence called "pseudo-cleft sentence". I've been thinking how to explain the use of the second "is" for a while now, and I've come to the conclusion that I will both post a paragraph from a book and add my own comment to it. The following sentences...