Hi Shahla, You can post your pieces of writing here: Essay, Report and Composition Writing forum. I'm sure you'll get both feedback and guidance. Best of luck with the IELTS.

I don't know what you mean by 'ebb and flow', but using the word 'static' and 'opaque' to describe your efforts suggests that you are enamoured of the passive voice and the polysyllabic. Use active voice; use simpler and clearer vocabulary. Let

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"All about me" can mean "only about me" or "everything about me." I'm not sure which she intends. I should think the "family" part would show how they have influenced the simple facts of your life as

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I was immediately attracted to the title when this came out, seeing as how I'm involved in theater. But the reviews GAVE THE SECRET AWAY. Sad but true. Luckily, I was able to see it in a theatre, before I'd read the reviews. All I knew was

tell me if its good or not id i had to add anything thanks Father Son Relationship The novel “The Kite Runner” by Khaled Hosseini is the story of edgy family relationships between a father and a son, and between two

I can't agree more! Whether this is culture or individual, each one of us should learn to practice little common courtesy and manner when requesting help or favor. I can't stress it enough. For some reason, I notice that

Can someone or teacher please check my essay for me? I need it before tomorrow (Thursday), October 29, 2009. This is 5 paragraph essay and it on My hometown. I can't attch it on files so I'm going to copy and paste below it. Thank you.