Hi! Tried to register, but it did not really work out... Anyway, I would like to ask if you can please check my letter of motivation :-) I hope it is at least good enoguh to justify the beginning of the 4th paragraph :-D Thank you very much in

aehm, yes, it is correct English actually.. after a comma in a letter you start with a capitalized word. In addition "I am looking forward to hearing from you" is correct... so I actually think its a good letter!

Hallo everyone, I used to live in England (when I was 11), I now live in the Netherlands. I have a question, im translating a letter for my work experiance. Can you all just have a quick look at the letter and if there are any real big misstakes

Hi there! Could you be so kind to check my motivation letter. I will be really glad to see any comments. I also hope my letter will bring to someone an idea what to write in his letter of motivation. Thanks a lot Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to

Hello, I have written a motivation letter for an undergraduate degree in UK. Would you please have a look at it and show me my mistakes. I would really apreciate this. Thank you in advance Dear Sir or Madam, Recently my country Bulgaria became a

Another version : Dear Sir or Madam, I am applying for the Postgraduate Diploma of Information Technology Management, as my first step in pursuing the Master of Management in Information Technology. My educational history was not really complete.

OK, how about this : Dear Sir or Madam, I am applying for the Postgraduate Diploma of Information Technology Management, as my first step in pursuing the Master of Management in Information Technology. My educational history was not really

Hi everybody, I have to write a letter of motivation for applying to a master program in business. I read some good letters in this forum and tried my best to write a letter myself. It woud be very helpful to get some feedback what you think about

Thanks RayH for your suggestions. I have reworked my statement into : Dear Sir or Madam, I am applying for the Postgraduate Diploma of Information Technology Management, as my first step in pursuing the Master of Management in Information

Dear ***, With reference to the job advertised in Guardian for Junior CAD Designer, I would like to apply for this position. I am very interested in this opportunity, and feel I have all the qualifications you are looking for. Despite my skills