In Pronouns^x, Paragraphs^x

Dear Jim, Where is this paragraph taken from? And is the following your explanation of the text ? The bad condition of his eyes came about suddenly; he was not expecting it.When blindness comes, it will be as if someone shut him up in the dark. (No one is really going to shut him up in the...

Eliminate the pronoun "I" from beginning most if not all sentences, even if you have to put the predicate first on an appropriate occasion

Hi, you mean A? Yes but the paragraph does not talk about the use of a building. Well, somewhere it tells us about a hotel, but not its use I think. I would think what has been cited in the paragraph to be the things which an engineer would take into consideration when building a building...

you mean A? but the paragraph does not talk about the use of a building. Well, somewhere it tells us about a hotel, but not its use I think. I would think what has been cited in the paragraph to be the things which an engineer would take into consideration when building a building rather than the...

Here's my edit of your essay: The Motorcycle Diaries: A Journey of Self-(*d)iscovery "The Motorcycle Diaries", directed by Walter Salles, is a film based : addition or modification The complete essay after modifying it: The Motorcycle Diaries: A Journey of Self-Discovery "The Motorcycle...

Hi MrP. As my message ended up on page three, I take the freedom to post it again. 1) "The impossibility of giving his assent to any of the positions which are party to these various disputes, on account of their apparent equipollence, leads the Pyrrhonist to the adoption of suspension of...

http://pinker.wjh.harvard.edu/articles/media/1994_01_24_thenewrepublic.html Probably no "grammatical error" has received as much scorn as "misuse" of pronoun case inside conjunctions (phrases with two parts joined by is an object that requires object case, it does not mean that is an object...

Hello, It is the closing paragraph of a chapter (in free indirct speech),I am out of my depth, and can't do any better;I have doubts about the concordance of the tense, punctuatitions, and some pronouns; please take a look at it and let me know how it sounds: ' those gloomy,god-forsaken...

hello if im writing a paragraph or just talking about something referred to myself can i omit the pronoun "I" everytime an action is made by the first person?? i dont like the way it sounds or the way it looks like in a text, maybe cos its kind of forbidden in spanish to repeat words or put them...

This paragraph is coming along nicely, Jobb. I would call it 'fine'. I would also eliminate one of the two 'take' verbs in the first sentence, change 'real big', and adjust a couple of pronouns. PS: I think I'll move this over to Writing World Forum, too.