By Sentence structures, Commas

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Would you please verify the sentence structure of following paragraph?. I have highlighted certain errors in red;please confirm if I am missing anything here. Thanks for taking the initiative again, (No comma. Use ', and' instead) this seems to be a good place. I think in your last proposal you...

None of the sentences make sense. They might make sense if the comma was after "thinking" but I'm not convinced that the sentence structure would be acceptable. If you omit the first two words, it's possible to make meaningful sentences: You would not shorten the hours or shut the store...

I am in need of a proofreader. I currently manage a noncommercial website that posts various writings of mine, including movie reviews. I am a fairly competent writer; however, I have what you may call "comma syndrome." I typically use them too often. My writings always have a surplus of...

Thank you! I'm slowly working on my English grammar skills so I might have other questions about sentence structure in the coming days.

Hi Alisa, I don't think that you can read any substantial difference in the placement or existence of commas in different renditions of Biblical passages. They are only different translators trying to present the passage as clearly as possible, as they see it, to the reader. These two...

Can you please advise me on the affect of the commas in the following sentence. 1. "These are the words which I spoke to you while I was still with you, that all things must be fulfilled which were written in the Law of Moses and the Prophets and the Psalms concerning Me." and 2. "These are...

1. You were using my camera, taking photos! USE THE COMMA, BUT THE SENTENCE STRUCTURE ITSELF IS SUSPECT. 2. You can do whatever you like for all I care. WITH OR WITHOUT THE COMMA 3. She came out of retirement to win 2 gold medals at the champions. NO COMMA Use commas for non-restrictive...

I would have used a comma before the final "and" or "or" in a series, like this: mother, and lesbian church, or community You need "losing parental custody" -- one "o" in "losing". I think you need a more parallel structure than "as an activist and through faith", maybe "through faith and...

Hi LM, Can't think of any particular rules. Your example is an adverbial complement, so the subject and verb are inverted and no comma is correct-- which won't happen in such sentences as 'under the moon, the wet trees glowed like corposant'. Certainly do not avoid fronted phrases, nor on the...