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Hi, I've made quite a number of edits for you to look at. I'm not sure exactly what the name of this university is. Some have special names, 'eg 'The University of Toronto', while others are simple, eg 'Bristol University'. What does it say on their website. Can you just call it 'Erasmus...

Anonymous wrote:It is an interesting question. Wherever it might be talking about rules, as in the example with Chinese names, it becomes a little bit unclear what is meant. So you could argue that this concrete usage sometimes leads to ambiguity and is not good English due to that. You can find...

I have corrected what you have posted. I feel that your letter needs one more paragraph (in the position marked 'P' below) to provide more specific detail of why this MA is important for you and why the Leiden MA is specifically appropriate to your needs.Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you...

As this is your final paragraph, you can write "Finally" (rather than "In addition").In addition, Finally, having lived, studied and worked in NYC and later in Paris, as a formal (univercity) and (university) graduated, I benefit of have gained multicultural experience. This broad-based...

That is very nice of you Feebs 1, thank you. But there is one thing that I am not sure to get it. The second part of the following paragraph it seems to be a bit disconnected and floating around, Me.....My principal assets are guided by my creative approach as a designer connected to a sharp...

"Paragraph sprawl" Definition: "paragraph sprawl is a problem with the way a paragraph works; that is, its sentences do not fit together tightly and focus on a central point. If your paragraphs go off in different directions, if you have put two or three unconnected ideas in one paragraph, or...

Hi, Thank you for your advice. I tried to organize it, this is my new personal statement. I tried to write it in the same order, but I couldn't make it to three paragraphs, as the paragraphs themself become longer. What do you think? Is this Better? Is it more organized? Should I remove a...

Hi, Thank you for your advice. I tried to organize it, this is my new personal statement. I tried to write it in the same order, but I couldn't make it to three paragraphs, as the paragraphs themself become longer. What do you think? Is this Better? Is it more organized? Should I remove a...

Thank u for ur help Clive. I really appreciate the work done by you. I will try to let you understand how each one relates to the 3 topics. and then please let me know the changes I should do to makea better statement of purpose as fast as possible. I have arranged the paragraphs in this...

Hello, Hoa Thai. Although Goodman outstripped me and deserved the brave one's laurels, I'd like to add some of the comments which I had started typing yesterday in the university, but hadn't time to finish... Your reasonong is interesting but not fault-less. «As CalifJim clearly explains...