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Anonymous wrote: When I first came to the University of California, Davis, I was among hundreds of students whose future seemed unclear. Four years of high school, two years of middle school, and six years of elementary school (Flip the order around) did not help me decide what I want to do in...

When I first came to the University of California, Davis, I was among hundreds of students whose future seemed unclear. Four years of high school, two years of middle school, and six years of elementary school did not help me decide what I want to do in my future. However, everything fell...

Dear forumI'm new here, finding this forum while searching for some paraphrases that are used in my Statement of Purpose (SoP), while applying for a PhD in Food Science.Then, I am lucky to find this forum, and I post my SoP here with the hope that someone, probably with a same interest, may read...

Hello everybody, This is my sceond post on this great website. Nobody replied to my first post, and this is quite urgent. I just need someone to look over my motivation letter and give some feedback/tips/hints. I'm a South-African in the process of applying for a degree at a university in the...

This is my personal statement, wich I will send to 3 different universities. I'm not sure about the order in wich letter is written, nor of the grammar/spelling. Secondly, I don't know how to adress the people of the admissions commitee. Could someone give me some advice? ----- Because...

Thanks allot for correcting my statement. And about 'making it sound as though this is the only course you are interested in!' its difficult because I'm sending application through UCAS for six similar courses at different universities and I can only write one version of personal statement, same...

Dear Sir/Madam I am a young Polish Musician/Producer currently living in Ireland. As a pianist I have a classical background but I am also passionate about contemporary electronic music of all genres (from experimental to so-called club music) and the possibilities that modern technology gives...

Hi again. I postet this as an anonymous because I thought that I'm logged in but I wasn't. I hope somebody will reply. Thanks again.

Hi everyone! I'm currently working on my personal statement for CTM course in UK. Could somene check it please advice on grammar, vocabulary and content. I know it is very like an autobiographical note but I think it gives a true overview of why I decidet to study and also it contains...

Thank you so much for helpping me! My fondest memories of youth consisted of playing with friends in open space with plants that could feed our imagination as well as our stomachs. As I grew up, the place grew up as well and new residential developments, commercial centers and parking lots paved...