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akb, I think you need to tighten the integration between your opening paragraph and the rest of your essay. Knowledge corresponds to which paragraphs. Skills corresponds to which paragraphs. etc. You also want to make sure that you provide adequate disclosure on each adjective. Where you...

Hi MoutainHiker, Again thanks for sparing time. Now the word 'FOCUSSED’ you used in your first reply is very much clear after looking at my mistakes. Here is the revise version. Dear Sir or Madam, It was magazine sorry 'databases' is one word THANKS for your patience with my mistake.

Dear Sir or Madam: I am applying for the master’s programme in International Humanitarian Action. I will highlight my relevant knowledge, skills, and experience that qualify me for admission to your programme. Upon graduation, I will return to the not-for-profit sector as a health...

Dear Sir or Madam: I am applying for the master’s programme in International Humanitarian Action. I will highlight my relevant knowledge, skills, and experience that qualify me for admission to your programme. Upon graduation, I will return to the not-for-profit sector as a health professional...

Hi, As you see, I have followed some of them, and not others. Actually, not I can’t see because I can’t be bothered to compare your specific iterations when you have taken some but not all. It would be helpful to know where you chose a different path and why. Dear Sir or Madam: I am...

Hoonkaew, Chalita 248/90 Charansanitwong Rd Bangkoknoi Bkk 10700 Thailand 24th November 2004 Dear NEO of France, -Thailand as a Local Committee Coordinator and Local Officer on Refugee and Peace. I took part in many projects of this association, for example, the donation camp for disable...

I am writing to apply for a member at the 1 “8th International Workshop 2005 in China“. Since I experienced 2about this Workshop, I begun to research the project and I was immediately convinced that I will apply for it. Because this would be a unique event in my life, which I would certainly...

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for the MSc International Management Thanking you for considering my application and looking forward to your positive reply. Yours Sincerely, 1) My name is Nicole Xxxx and ...They will see your name at the bottom of the letter. No need to say...

Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing to apply for the student exchange program at the University of xxx. Having passed my “Vordiplom” in Mechanical Engineering successfully with a grade of 2.9 out of 4, I am now in the 7th semester of my studies at the xxx. I am looking forward to learning more...

Dear Lotus, Let's have a look at your letter. MountainHiker Dear sir/ Madam I am writing to apply for the Master´s degree program in International Business at Xxx University. I am confident this course will enable me to pursue a career as a product manager in Strategic Marketing in an...