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Dear Sir/Madame, I am writing in order to apply for the International relations and Diplomacy master program at your University. I am currently studying International Relations at the University of International relations and world languages after Ablay khan in Almaty, Kazakhstan . My major...

Dear Mister MicawberI am sorry for be a bore. I am now applying for PhD position in abroad. I would request you to kindly help in my process.Here is my another letter to one Graduate school. Actually I had applied to one professor. He asked me to apply in Graduate program. As per the website, ...

Dear Mister MicawberHere is my letter to that Professor requesting to send the consent letter to proceed further. I would oblige you to correct this too.Mean time if you find any mistake in English, I would request you to give feedback then and there. I am gladly welcome your feedback. Looking...

.Beware the dangers of verbosity. I am unfamiliar with the phrase 'fair-traded' but presume it is a word familiar to those in the import-export business..I am writing about the possibility of obtaining work experience within the ***. Currently, I am studying International Business...

Galina, overall you have a very good grasp of English, but it gets a little muddy... I think you may have tried to use as many long words as you could and it bogs down. You start out by talking about international communications, but then move to international business. Also, you don't start...

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Galina Hristova and presently I am living in Bulgaria. I have always wanted to get international communication experience and to get know different countries with their unique traditions, culture, customs and historical heritage. I am quite sure that becoming...

I'd appreciate it , if there is someone who can help me , by showing me the mistake I have done.:))10x in advanceDear Sir or Madam, My name is Galina Hristova and presently I am living in Bulgaria. I have always wanted to get international communication experience and to get know different...

Thanks Mister Micawber for your reply and your advice. Sample of Job Application Letter help me a lot even though the purpose of the letter is different. http://jobsearch.about.com/od/morejobletters/a/jobappletter.htm How about if I change to this:

Dear members, First paragapgh: We are a team of students from Singapore national university have chosen your company, Singapore Automobiles to participate in the Online Marketing Challenge. With your cooperation, our team Empressrio will develop a free online marketing campaign by using...

Dear Mrs. ..: I am writing to apply for the Erasmus students mobility programme for the winter semester 2008/09 of my fifth year. My first option is the Erasmus School of Economics in Rotterdam in the Netherlands. I would like to have the opportunity to enroll in this program, because I think it...