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Hey everyone! First-timer to this forum. Was wondering if anyone can help me out? I recently wrote an essay for my Critical Writing class (English 102) at college. Unfortunately, it didn't do too well. My instructor said that it was too vague and didn't have very good examples. He likes the...

I am currently a student at University of British Columbia in the faculty of Arts. In the past, I attended Vancouver Technical Secondary; looking back at my school years, I enjoyed grade eight the most: because it was special, successful and exciting. In the transition from elementary to high...

I write an essay for my final examination. I have to hand it tomorrow. Please correct it for me. I write about British Education System: Successes and Failure Thanhs in advance. INTRODUCTION Nowadays, Education becomes a sensitive social, economic and political issue in most European countries....

Gulnur: I like your topic, and I think you are on the right track. I can see that you have worked hard on your essay. It has given me much to think about. Let me offer your some suggestions. I’m not sure where your essay begins. Does it begin with “Do you agree or disagree with the following...

Here is my essay. I am studying for Toefl. Could you please help me Thanks Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should always show their strong emotions. (Such as excitement, anger or joy)?? In my opinion people should show their emotions to some extent. Since...

I breifly skimmed over that link and there ae a number of useful points especially in the first segment 'parts of an essay' Wow, the subsequent segments are a bit cumbersome but there seems to be some relevent points. is it aimed at university students?

hiya, this is my research proposal for phd...just want u to read it & give feedback on it. thanking you very much ! Also would appreciate if u could also tell me other ways to get it marked. cheers, jack ------------------ When I first came to the UK last September, there were many sights I...

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Yes, I think that standard is on the way out. I've read that two spaces was a requirement for type-setters, and that modern wordprocessing has made this obsolete. Also, I couldn't help noticing that you've written one space between sentences in your question. I know I shouldn't nitpick, as this...

Well, my first impression is that it is a band 6 essay. I'll rewrite it making changes accordingly. The graph illustrates four kinds of writing technology: computer, typewriter, function pen and ball point pen which undergraduate students used to prepare their university assignments in the...