Hi, I now "finished" my LoM and hope u can help me to correct it, make it better and perhaps distend it. Is there anything I forgot ? or something I could still mention eg. computer experiences and cad systems ? and in which row ? Here

Hi, first thx for your corrections so far I try to write a letter of motivation for an student exanche to the USA. The text, you corrected, was just the first part of my letter. I have to finish it now and then I will post it here for

Hi, I want to do an exchange and study there for 1 years. So I have to write a letter of motivation. I already started it, but I need some help, to correct this (I think there will be many things wrong :( ) Here is what I wrote already:

Hi, q1: "honor" is spelled differently depending on location. Honour is UK and Honor is Am. q2: keep the military stuff q3: keep the supervisor encouragement stuff From what I could see of your resume, it looks fine. It needs better

Hi, I see you are online now. I am just reviewing your stuff and will comment soon. MountainHiker

First of all a huge HELLOOOO.. first time here and surprised by the existance of such fora... I am about to send my cv and motivation letter to a university in italy-design course- (teaching in english hehehe...). I wonder if you could review

Dear all, here we find a letter of motivation I´ve written. I saw another two posts with similar topics and I already learned from them. I would like to get advices and criticism on it. I´m looking forward to it!!! hugs Nat Dear

is there a particular format to a letter of motivation for a scholarship? does it look like a letter where my name and address are at the top, followed by the date, name and address of the person i'm writing to and "yours sincerely" at the end

Hi I want you please to check my letter of motivation because I want t apply to a University: “What would I do after?” That was the question reasoning on my mind while I was in high School. However, I had the answer since my childhood where