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Hello MrPedantic, Thanks so much. Your enthusiastic comments on my essay will be much help for my coming test in next month. Therefore, please let my show you how I correct my mistakes. I don’t want just copy your solutions without knowing the reasons. 'with certain collected evidences'] not...

Question I: Number (2) has too many 'what's, and 'gonna' is unacceptable except in slovenly spoken language. Number (3) would only be useful in limited contexts: 'you never know what happens next until after you've seen the movie'. (1) and (4) are fine are fine for general use, as is (2a)...

Hello Your first sentence in your opening paragraph needs a dependent word marker to identify it as a dependent clause. Try, "With a stick in one hand..." Also, watch your comma usage. There are several places where you do not put a comma before the conjunction "but".

Hello. The sentences listed were composed by me except for the first one, so these might have incorrect expressions.... I just forcus on 'such as' and conjugate the verbs. 1.My mom is always asking me to do lots of jobs around the house, such as (mow) the lawn and (wash) the dishes after...

I hope you and julielai don’t mind if I jump in. . The film not only helped me realize all the work that is put into the making of a film, but it also helped me to decide what I want to do with my life—become a great film director. General Notes: Overall, well done. You have a little...

Hi, I am going to comment on three of your paragraphs, and then let you finish your essay. We are going to examine your first and second paragraphs, as well as your paragraph on sexual love. **First Paragraph** Love is a passionate four letter word that all of us have experienced before. Love...

Joannis Garcia English 50 Professor Anguiano Paper # 1 Final Draft 6 October 2004 Leaving Peru Most people leave their countries for many economic reasons, political problems, religious persecution, or sometimes just to fulfill a personal dream in their lives. Since I was a child, I knew that...

I would have used a comma before the final "and" or "or" in a series, like this: mother, and lesbian church, or community You need "losing parental custody" -- one "o" in "losing". I think you need a more parallel structure than "as an activist and through faith", maybe "through faith and...

Gulnur: I like your topic, and I think you are on the right track. I can see that you have worked hard on your essay. It has given me much to think about. Let me offer your some suggestions. I’m not sure where your essay begins. Does it begin with “Do you agree or disagree with the following...

Hi: Even though I am barely qualified, I have found myself teaching Middle School English. In order for the students to have a better understanding of clauses, I have insisted that they punctuate compound sentences with a comma and a coordinating conjunction, instead of just the conjunction....