In Genders^x, Essays^x

Thank you so much, Mr. Micawber. But what if we are unable to identify the quote author's gender? Could I just use "he" for all of them? hehe Mr. Micawber wrote: I find that students write better, stronger and clearer essays if they choose one side or the other to support, rather than...

Hi Jeff, Your first paragraph is rather attractive already. I would make an effort to discover the quote author's gender, in order to avoid the 'he/she' awkwardness. Here are some other words or phrases that need work: speaker (I'd change to 'writer' since it is not obviously from a...

Here is my essay. Hope you will help me edit it. Thank you very much. The speaker claims that the destiny of society is determined by how children are socialized today, however, we haven’t yet learned to raise children who can help bring about a better society. Our children are our...

It sounds like you are writing an essay on gender. If you google for 'grammatical gender', you will find much more information than I have time to type here. If you have trouble locating 'common gender', an example is: 'man' as a species name refers to both 'man', the male of the species, and...

The topic of the essay is supposed to be our overall statement about pop culture. I have tried to be as specific as possible. What frustrates me the most is we are supposed to incorporate major points from 3 essays we have written over the semester and they are so unrelated. Anyway, here is my...

Suggest you read the thread, particularly Mr. P's erudite comments. There is another thread about this, but I can't locate it at present. When I do, I'll post it to you, unless someone else finds it first. (are you there, Mr. P?) Meanwhile, take a look at this site for Duchess of...

Well, without knowing the subject of the essay, I can only guess. But including at least some of these words and phrases should ensure a good mark: equivocal tendentious paradoxically chromatic gender-specific polynomial Claude Lévi-Strauss discourse sub-canonical genre Pascal's...

Hi, I'm working on this essay for my own studies and website that I am making. I will need a well formulated thesis example which can aid me in my future studies and also for my documentation for my website. My website will have alot of information for others to read and take reference. But the...

Hi Julie, Thanks for your reply. I am trying to get ride of paraphrasing (my french teacher said the same as you). I re-wrote the essay. Please let me know if it is better. Thanks Best...

Ok I havent gotten started because I dont really know how to start out my definition essay. I picked the topic 'feminism'. I am going to explain it in a way that everyone views feminism; like every woman is naturally a feminist and believes in feminist views. Then I am going to tell it from my...