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Dear Sir or Madam, In the process of completing my last block of the International Economic Studies in combination with the Quantitative Economics Degree at the University of xxx, I am writing to apply for the PhD xxx 2005. xxx xxx I think you need to rewrite your letter. You need a...

Angelica, You certainly write well for a person who learned English as a second language. I am going to review a paragraph or two at a time. It takes too long to do everything in one go. I hope nona the brit and/or julielai help as well. A tudent You are Chinese, no? Thus, I wouldn't think...

Hi MrP, I think “caveat” is just the perfect word. But I don’t know how to use it in the following two sentences. Should I use “make” or “give” or something else? 1) “A common way of accounting for the texts in which Sextus seems to be espousing negative dogmatic views consists in applying to...

Sorry to be so long, but I have been looking for a good comprehensive internet source on dashes; all the information seems to be in bits and pieces, and some of it is quite contradictory. Here is a good excerpt, however, from the Get it Write website: 'A number of you have written to ask us to...

Nguyen Thi Le Dung Provenierssingel 85 A 3033 EJ Rotterdam UNIVERSITY COLLEGE UTRECHT Faculty: Academic Core, Humanities, Science, and Social Science. Dear Sir: I am a Vietnamese citizen living in Holland and I would like to apply for the Bachelor of Liberal of Art's Degree program in Social...

Hi, Phew, there is a lot to get hold of here! I think that mountainhiker's suggested structure will work very well for this letter and you have worked hard to make improvements to your original. I think you still need to plan your letter a little more clearly as at the moment it is all a bit...

Let's keep this as our guide. I suggest the following: 1) Introduction (very quick points) 1a) Who you are 1b) What you want to do 1c) Why do you want to do it 1d) What do you want from them 2) Detailed background 2a) Expand on who you are 3) Detailed background 3a) Expand on what you want to...

Thanks for your reply!I have just finished the first two paragraphs for your request.Can you help me to correct it,plz! Dung Here it is: Nguyen Thi Le Dung Dear Sir: (see if you can find the...

My mother Mary Johnson is like a lot of mothers. She has a busy career and a hectic schedule outside of work. She is a practical nurse at a long-term care facility and is also a nursing student at a local community college where she plans to obtain her associate nursing degree. Besides her...

Jon, I think your letter reads quite well. One sentence stood out to me because it is the same type of structure that I have difficulty with. I am going to play with it a bit. You might find you don't like my revised letter. If that is the case, at least you are better prepared to tweak...