By Paragraphs, Nouns

Interesting story, Hamooor, but-- oh dear!-- there are many mistakes. Here is your first sentence corrected: This is a true story. I saw it happen some months ago.First, you should review your composition and put it into a paragraph form instead of using a new line for each sentence. ...

The following is in the Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English. 4 balance the budget : if a government balances the budget, they make the amount of money that they spend equal to the amount of money available My question is in a phrase "a government balences," "a government" is...

Read the following and choose the number of word which is not proper in context. (originally it has diagram, but I couldn't post picture last time. I'll try to post again. but even if I fail, please try the following and give me your precious opinions) In order to make a paper plane, you...

Sorry, I changed the category of the question to Voc. and idioms Read the following and choose the number of word which is not proper in context. (originally it has diagram, but I couldn't post picture last time. I'll try to post again. but even if I fail, please try the following and give...

a present tense after expressions like "the first time" is practically always unnatural Perhaps this is true after "That was the first time ..." followed by the description of a past event or action, but not when discussing a "work of art", including films, sound recordings, plays,...

Anonymous wrote:The following paragraph has many awkward constructions and grammatical mistakes. Can anyone correct the mistakes and/or rephrase the sentences in a better way? "Not only in appearance but also the foraging technique at which each bird was respectively most proficient, was unique...

Anonymous wrote:Heey, could someone please help me with correctingthis Essay that I have to hand in tomorrow...........!!!thanks in advance______________________________________________________The Assignment was to write 3 paragraphs, aboutyour favourite room. use relatively pronouns andgive a...

Heey, could someone please help me with correctingthis Essay that I have to hand in tomorrow...........!!!thanks in advance______________________________________________________The Assignment was to write 3 paragraphs, aboutyour favourite room. use relatively pronouns andgive a general...

Only proper nouns are capitalised, not all nouns. There are lots of other nouns that you haven't capitalised. Check all of your capitals; is it a proper noun? I think you do need more paragraphs. Each separate idea or thought should have its own paragraph.

Thanks a lot. Do you think its correct to seperate these paragraphs the way that you have done so?, can you tell me which words contain capital letter. Isn't "Athlete" a noun, so it must be capitalised?