It is polite enough. But I would suggest a grammatic change (separating the "via post" explanation with commas) and, perhaps, a shift in why you are sending it. For example: I have applied online. However, I would also like to send you

Actually, neither is fully correct, but the first one is more correct. I would punctuate thus: The custom was to call once for each kill; but this was Angry Face's first, and, in his excitement, he kept yelling. You want to separate the

I'm nowhere close to finished. -- Better: I am nowhere close to being finished. Poker online, unlike live poker, if you wait for good cards, you won't get paid whereas in live... In online poker , unlike live poker, if you wait for good

I would use commas in both, the first because it is a fronted sentence adverbial (you wouldn't need the comma if the phrase came at the end of the sentence), and the second because its omission mis-references 'however'. After XXX fell in 1937 ,

"Hi!" is a sentence by itself. Dear Jane, Hi! I bet you thought you'd never hear from me again. I've been very busy since the move but I hate to lose touch with my friends, so I thought I'd write you. The correct way to

Like if someone was saying something I was thinking about or had spoken to someone else about moments before he brought it up. Which should I use...mention or mentioned? Like if someone was saying something I was thinking about, or had spoken

The custom was to call once for each kill; but this was Angry Face's first and , in his excitement , he kept yelling. The custom was to call once for each kill; but this was Angry Face's first , and in his excitement , he kept yelling.

Hi, 45 , 900 how to read this If it is a quantity, use the comma as shown and say forty-five thousand, nine hundred But if it is not a quantity,but instead is eg a serial number on a product, say four five nine zero

Dear Homwork helper, I need your help to solve following questions as soon as possible. Thanks a million Rahman 1. The phrase in bold face is a phrase fragment. Correct it by attaching it to the nearby independent clause:

1. it's 3. my code has been the same for as......use semi-colon instead of comma 4. can be shorter and easier to read, but what you have is correct\ 5. semi-colon instead of comma 7. good a chance 8. that's orders, 9.