hi, just wondered if i could get a couple of ideas on what i could put in my summary paragraph of my personal statement. i have no idea on how to start it what so ever so if anyone can help or give me any ideas, then please do thank you!!!

My mom once told me a story about the lion and the deer. She said on the African grassland the deer mother tells her children when they run, they must run faster than the slowest deer because if they don't, then they will get eaten by the

Hi, I would like to apply for a postgraduate programme. The following is still in draft mode. Any comments on it ? Is it too short ? Thanks for your help. Dear Sir or Madam, I am applying for the Postgraduate Diploma of Information Technology

I am writing a personal statement for my CV i quickly need somebody to make sure that this sentence makes sense? or if it can be improved "I am determined to find and learn from opportunities that will allow me to become a better

I had written a personal statement, the first comment I got from the professor that I have to work on my English. Quote: I will strongly advice you to revise the English of the personal statement. Right now it does not make sense. Work with

Hi, I think the best way to approach this is to break it into 3 sections; why this subject; why you; and are you interesting and unique. So, I'd definitely expand on what you've got - I'd probably aim to write 1 - 2 pages of properly

Hi, I think the best way to approach this is to break it into 3 sections; why this subject; why you; and are you interesting and unique. So, I'd definitely expand on what you've got - I'd probably aim to write 1 - 2 pages of properly

Hi, I know a website that can do this for you - www.personalstatementadviceuk.com - if you e-mail them they may be able to help you. They checked mine and made quite a few changes and I got my first choice university. Martin

Personal Statement When I was a kid I was thrilled by “LEGO” and a freedom it gave me to design, practical anything .That hobby improved my creativity. And since when I knew where I wanted to express myself . I got my first computer when I was 10

thanks a lot!!! i just didn't know sometimes how to correct the things you underlined o.O anyway, i tried to fix it a little bit at least! :)