In Tenses^x, Essays^x

Belly wrote: Topic: If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer If I could changed the ground's surface in order to lessen risks when traveling. The filthy state of the ground also account...

You MUST capitalize the I in English, and don't forget to end with a period. Anewcomer wrote: Can i give it one more try? Check this please The last time I saw her, she waved good-bye from a plane that took her away . - This is okay The last time I saw her, she waved good-bye from...

Hoa Thai wrote: Belly wrote: Ok I understood that drinking implies a continuous activity, but it may violate with the parallelsim, may not it? Not really! This sentence contains the vilolation: "He sat at the terrace and was drinking coffee." One clause uses the simple past tense and...

Belly wrote: Ok I understood that drinking implies a continuous activity, but it may violate with the parallelsim, may not it? Not really! This sentence contains the vilolation: "He sat at the terrace and was drinking coffee." One clause uses the simple past tense and the other uses the past...

Thanks for the compliment. I can only give you my two cents, for I am no expert in the subject. First of all, there is no need to add "Mother bawled", "he shouted", "she emphasized", Mother commented" and things like that at every turn. It only makes the speeches of the characters mechanical...

Nikhilthunderlion wrote: which tense is used while writing an essay It depends on what you're writing about.

which tense is used while writing an essay

"ma" should be "my." I should always be capitalized. .. is not a way to end a sentence. Sentences start with capital letters. I broke my leg - not I have broke "I will never walk again" seems like an overly dramatic ending! You have a few problems with tense. Either put it all...

Highlighted some of your glaring errors for you. In addition to basic grammatical issues, there're issues with your understanding of the topic. T_nattawat wrote: Topic: Nowaday food is easier to prepare. Has this change improved way people live? In this globalization (need an adj.)...

The building of the new missile still has current relevance, so the original tense of the announcement is retained in the retelling: "We have built a new missile." Iran announced that it had built a new missile. (Correct. Can be used for all time, i.e., this can be said a thousand...