In Tenses^x, Punctuation^x

Jack, As I see it, the reason for the use of present & past tense in this story is: The narrator (Margaret) is telling her story now, in the present. "My daughter IS an athlete" She then goes on to talk about the past "Until her freshman year in high school, Ann WAS only marginally...

Now I have to look for an error in the sentence above... Can you find it? I've been thinking about it for a long time, and I can't see any mistakes. The verb tense is accurate, there's nothing wrong regarding concord, countability of nouns... Maybe punctuation? A comma after the fronted...

Hi Jazz, Thanks for saying I could correct your post on line. Re: your reply to Ali; 1. In English we always begin a new sentence with a capital letter, and we use a capital letter for people's names, and for names of places such as London, the Indian Ocean etc. So your greeting should...