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Thanks for trying anyway, that's very kind. Financial concepts apart, do you think the wording of my letter is correct?

Hi all, I am currently looking for a new position in finance as I have been laid off quite recently due to the financial crisis. I have already sent some applications but I am affraid some parts of my cover letter may be a bit rubbish. I would really appreciate if you could help me to be sure...

I need someone to proofread this sentence for me please. Am I missing a comma somewhere?"I would love the opportunity to work for your company as this would allow me to use my writing abilities and my education in International Relations."

Bonjour Anieta,Dans le premier paragraphe je changerais le suivant: 1) grabbed my attention / caught my attention 2) I am currently launching myself / I am currently establishing myself Paragraphe #2 - radier ( suggestion) to deal with my own business Paragraph #4 - Inclure ' with the right...

.I have underlined some problem areas. One point-- usually, you should use simple past tense where you have used present perfect:Motivation Letter:The Graduate programme in Finance at Hampton College is according my target to develop my skills on the financial field for a knowledge improvement...

Saturdays are slow, David. We have real lives here - softball games, trips to Sears, battling the grocery store. Don't get too upset if we take a few hours to respond. Are you looking for help on the paragraph about your gap? Don't put that on your resume! It is WAY to much information...

Can anyone help me please with this letter? Grammar and concordance for example?Motivation Letter:The Graduate programme in Finance at Hampton College is according my target to develop my skills on the financial field for a knowledge improvement and a career progression on the financial...

Hello! I am a French translator, and I know that my cover letter needs revision, as this is the first time I apply in English and I am not at ease with idiomatic expressions. I would like to apply today, so if you can go over it as soon as possible, I would appreciate very much. Please do not...

Never begin a cover letter with "Dear Sir or Madam" or "To Whom it May Concern." Correspondence with generic salutations often signal to potential employers that you lack the initiative to locate the appropriate contact. If a job listing does not include the name of the hiring...

Hello All i wrote a cover letter. i need your view. please read and type your comment.don't worry its short Dear Sir/Madam, I have graduated from Industrial Engineering department of Eskişehir Osmangazi University. During my study life...