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Tips for Writing a Paragraph -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Tips for Writing a ParagraphCharacteristics of a good paragraph: Topic sentence, which includes the topic and a controlling idea. Supporting ideas (usually 3 - 6), which support the...

Diamondrg wrote: Taken from a nationwide exam in Turkey. Do you think there is anything wrong with this sentence? I do. A comma is needed after the word "aim" and I have doubts about the use of "one of which" to refer to a singular countable noun "aim". What do you think? Can the expression "a...

Hi. I would greatly appreciate your time and effort to proof read my 3 paragraphs. Written for a media class assignment, magazine article. Please tell me the grammar mistakes in it. I've read it a few times though. The human mind may function as same as a rat pressing a...

Hi friends, I don't understand the exact meaning of this expression on this paragraph I have read on Bob Dylan's Chronicles book: 'It was hard to sing- didn't seem to have the magic that the previous version had. I shrugged, COULDN'T GET IT, WAS HAVING *** LUCK trying to cut this version.'...

Hello, I would like to know the exact meaning of this expression on this paragraph: ' Italianate, Gothic, Roman Catholic art. Sweeping front porches, turrets, cast-iron balconies, colonnades- thirty-foot columns, gloriously beautiful - double pitched roofs, all the architecture of the whole wide...

Julielai wrote: Hi Nightstalker, Grammar aside, I have problems with your content. Those Tang poets who focused on military scenes weren't influenced by Zen, surely (????). Why don't you rework this paragraph and see if it is better? (Is this a school assignment or is this part of your...

Hi Nightstalker, Grammar aside, I have problems with your content. Those Tang poets who focused on military scenes weren't influenced by Zen, surely (????). Why don't you rework this paragraph and see if it is better? (Is this a school assignment or is this part of your work?) Zen Buddhism...

Hi Nadja, Nice use of expressions in this essay. Here are some corrections. There are one or two places where a word in your original is not necessary, though there is nothing wrong with using it. I have indicated these by putting square brackets around the word. Let me know if you don’t...

Hi again, Kin has some helpful points there. Regarding the grammar, there are a few points I indicate here from the first two paragraphs. Would you like to have a look at these and then try and see if you can find anything similar in the final two paragraphs? (I don’t think there are many...

Antonija wrote: Hello, Is it OK to use this expression in this context? Please comment freely on this extract. Can you suggest a better way for starting the sentence? Thank you Due to the stated reasons, a one- or two-day adultery does not count at all. These are some kind of juvenille...