Hello to all! I am going to apply for a master's scholarship and need to have a very good motivation letter. I would really appreciate if you could review my letter and point out its weaknesses. Thanks a lot! Larissa PS: My letter seems long

Hi! I would need quick help for my motivation letter , I am applying for an internship! Thanks already and I appreciate your help!! Sarah Dear Dr. Smith, I am very interested in applying for an internship for spring 2009 in your department. I

Sarah: Please do not use the "glad", "happy" words. They are pretty weak and (in my opinion) a bit girlish. Be more emphatic and decisive. I have added a few of my reactions, comments and suggestions. If it seems a bit abrupt,

Hi! I would need quick help for my motivation letter, I am applying for an internship! Thanks already and I appreciate your help!! Sarah Dear Dr. Smith, I am very interested in applying for an internship for the spring of 2009 in your

Dear Masters, Can you please review my motivation letter for CERN ? Please feel free to cut lines of paragraphs that you might think that don't apply. Best regards, José Pedro Cardoso Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to express my great interest

Ca: You need to work more on this letter. I hope my suggestions will be a good starting point for you. All the best A-Stars. Hope someone can help me with the correction of this motivation letter for my bachelor degree as a foreign er student at

hi i am new to this site. i am preparing a motivation /sop letter for my PG. is there anyone to help me ??

Hope someone can help me with the correction of this motivation letter for my bachelor degree as a foreigner student at a university in the netherlands. Here below is a copy of my letter where I cutted the name of the institution I'm applying

I am not a native English speaker, however, I have recently been writing a lot of applications for PhD programs (I am a Theoretical Physics student). I hope my corrections/comments help. Good luck! -- I am writing to  apply for a  PhD position in

Hi! I would really need help with my motivation letter, I posted this already ysterday, but unfortunately I would need it quite quick. Thanks already for your help! John Dear Miss Smith, I am writing to apply for a PhD position in Material