In Paragraphs^x, Essays^x

Question: Should experiments be conducted on animals for the benefit of human beings? My introduction paragraph is like this: According to the recent research, there are 50 to 100 million of animals worldwide , from Zebra-fish to non-human primates, are used in scientific experiments. Yet at the...

Hi, If you are really trying to write an essay, you need to tell us the title. You also need to organize it in the form of paragraphs, consisting of an introduction, one or more pojnts/topics, and a conclusion. Best wishes, Clive

Hi Chibi. Paragraphs are always welcome. Highlights show possible problems. Topic: Today many young women choose to stay single. What do you think are the reasons for this new trend? Write an essay between 300 and 350 words about what many lead to one woman’s decision not to marry. ...

Hi, First, you need to organize your thoughts into several paragraphs. This helps the reader to understand the way you are thinking about the topic, and to easily see the various points that you are making. Nobody really wants to read one huge paragraph. So, please change this and repost....

can someone check my paragraph?? Decision-making is common processes in companies. Every manager has to announce new decisions in order to achieve company the decision-making process, provide appropriate models to make better decisions and forecasting.

. I have underlined some problem areas: Writing is one of the powerful tools that a person can have because it expresses who we are as a person. It’s a key to achievement in school, in the workplace , Writing equips you with the communication and thinking skills you need to participate...

Hi! Susankay, Can I ask a favor? Can you please check this paragraph for me? I really need to fix this for my English class and by the way thanks for edit my essay. My teacher already accept my paper,I really appreciated it. In the letter written by Ernesto Meza to city of Stockton, he...

I suggest taking out the fourth paragraph all together. But make sure your essay is long enough for your assignment. Perhaps elaborating a bit more on the deaths? Cosmetic surgery: a miracle worker? A study by Psychology Today magazine shows that many people are not satisfied with...

I tried to improve the things you indicated. I tried to change the paragraph beginning with 'a common ground' into another argument. Indeed, that paragraph made no sense. Did you mean that I had to combine paragraph 2 and 3? (the point about death) Isn't the second paragraph too long...

I have tried to correct the mistakes you underlined, and have changed some other things. Could you please look if everything is correct? (I really do not know how I can rephraze the sentence I underlined in the introduction paragraph) Cosmetic surgery: a miracle worker? A study by...