. I have stricken out some inappropriate material and underlined other problem areas. You have trouble with commas: Honestly, I still did not know exactly what I wanted to study, when I was almost done with school. On one hand I was interested

hey guys!! i'm just working on applications for universities and i'm starting to feel desperate with all those motivation letters and stuff... i hope one of you can help me with this one and tell me if i made too many mistakes. ;) thanks a

"I had the opportunity to see the wide range of practical journalism and media studies courses" ? I had the opportunity to experience/attend/follow the wide range of practical journalism and media studies courses"

thank you for taking time to read it and for your helpful suggestions. Does it really make sense to say "I had the opportunity to see the wide range of practical journalism and media studies courses" ? I mean that was attending the

My interest in media studies dates back to my years at high school when I started to realize how mass media and new means of communication change our everyday lives. I had a chance to observe the huge transformation of the media system in my

Hi everybody, I'm working on my personal stetement for postgraduate programme (Media and Communications Studies). I've managed to put there everything I wanted, but I'm not sure whether it's uderstandable, gramatically correct,

Hi Grammar Geek, wow that was quick. Thanx a lot! But I'm really amazed, great forum. T.

Hello, I'm a guy from Sweden and right now I'm writing a letter to a university in the USA. Since it's a very important letter I want it to be perfect. I'd really appreciate it if someone here could have a look at it and give me

English language experts, could you check the grammer for me. urgent... as the dateline is this coming thursday. My interest in bookkeeping dates back to age 14. I was elected as the class treasurer due to my excellent result in

. I have underlined some problems. It is also a bit wordy, and I have struck out phrases which should be eliminated (you will probably have to revise the sentences to accommodate these omissions): Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing this