By Proofreading

Proofreading something in English has something to do with teaching English to ESL leaners? If so, how?

Proofreading an essay.

I was wondering if anybody could read over my essay for admissions into FIT and help me with any spelling/grammer or any thing else that needs to be changed? its not that long of a paper.. i would greatly appretiate it. let me know, thanks in advanced.

Hi everyone! This is my first toefl essay and it took me a little less than 20 minutes to write (did I mention that already?). I'll be most appreciative if you can take a look at it and point out anything weird you notice. Every generation of people is different in important ways. How is your...

I agree. After I read my writing a couple times, it didn't sound good. It didn't go smoothly sentence after sentence. Thank you.

Firstly, I'm not a native speaker and might be incorrect sometimes. You should really avoid that kind of paratactical writing style. You write sentence after sentence without any subjunctions, instead try to link the sentences with words like "therefore", "because", "but", "yet",...

The Yellow River is a great symbol of China. Through out thousand years, it brings joy and sorrow. There was a time the great emperor wanted to prevent the great flooding. The flooding drowned over a million people. People felt fear about this river. They were very superstitious. They prayed the...

Feebs11 wrote:I think Darkjackass is confused in that this posting starts with a piece about gibbons, whereas "proofreading#25" is the piece about being blocked from the website in fact , first look don't understand what are talk about in this paragraphe, i can saying sorry for i come here

oh gosh how did that happen? Sorry!

I think Darkjackass is confused in that this posting starts with a piece about gibbons, whereas "proofreading#25" is the piece about being blocked from the website