By Translation, Paragraphs

Dear mountainHiker: I did better. please take a look at that now and tell me should I take paragraphs two and seven out of my letter? now, the general format of the letter is correct or not? Best regards, Jay...

Manager of the Program Division of Industrial Marketing & e-Commerce XXX State University January 3rd, 2005 Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing to apply for the Master’s Program in e-Commerce. I think one of my most distinguishing characteristics is the diversity of experiences I possess....

there is a short paragraph which is translated from Chinese into English. but i feel the translation isn't very good. i need your help! the summary idea of this paragraph is to introduce a magazine. i called it for short. thank you very much! your advice is hereby earnestly solicited. the...

Dear Sir or Madam: I am seeking an intern of developers, from professors to undergraduates. For me, the project is project management and cooperation understanding more than familiarity with JBuilder and Oracle. try fixing up the previous stuff, and then we'll look at your remaining...

Hi Sunflower, Your letter is fine, with some subtle exceptions. But just be careful because "major" and "common" are often very similar. As I demonstrated, sometimes you can use the words interchangably. From my quick and uneducated reading of the following URL I tend to agree that...

Hello MountainHiker: Thanks for your comments! Please find bellow the paragraph I've mentioned: Dear Dr. ______ The sentence “lymphangioma is the major cause of macroglossia” was confusing and did not depict what the authors really meant due to poor translation into English. In the edited...

Hello everybody, I've written a short note I have to send to an autralian professor. I am not sure if it is correct the way I've done. Would you please correct it for me? I appreciate any help! The sentence “lymphangioma is the major cause of macroglossia” was confusing and did not precisely...

Hi everyone Here is my first draft of critiquing a journal. I am not sure if I am on the right track. Can anyone give me some suggestions and correct my grammar? Thanks. Critique of “The Effects of Amount and Type of Exposure on Adult Learners’ L2 Development in SLA” This research attempts to...

"Unnerved" means "without courage or confidence". The sentence "Unnerved, Liu Beu dropped his chopsticks to the floor" makes perfect sense.

Jobb, You are quite skilled with your English transations. As I read it, nothing jumped out at me as being incorrect. Some small items. 1) Comma usage If we look at item 13, we note the following sentence is incorrect. I turned the corner, and ran smack into a patrol car. Do you think...