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Please help me with the motivation letter..specially in the forth paragraph..Any modifications and suggestions will be accepted..This letter answers the following question: " Please write a clear and detailed description of your academic objectives and the reasons why you wish to pursue them....

Mimoi2 wrote:Does anyone have any suggestions for this motivation letter? Anything would be really appreciated! Name Address1 Address2 Phone Date To Whom It May Concern: I would put a comma after the Concern rather than the semi-colon. With this letter I would like to express...

Anonymous wrote: Since childhood, I have had a very strong desire for learning everything new. This became a habit of life for me and affected my point of view a lot towards learning as not being just a routine. This habit encouraged me to continually upgrade my academic capabilities. In this...

The format is fine in my opinion. There is no rule that everything has to be 3 paragraphs long, that is just a simple format taught to novice essay writers to help them create a basic essay. A paragraph can be a single sentence if appropriate. The main thing to avoid is letting paragraphs get too...

Hello, Could you please help me a little bit? Thans for advice about reference letters, but how to write a sort of reference totally devoted to my knowlegde of English? It shouldn't be long, just about one paragraph. Should it be just like "*** is a very diligent student, her level of English is...

After people finishing their high shcool, they faces two ways generally. One is going to higher education; Another is working. Many factors affect people's choosing, such as econimic ability, interests and his/ her attitude towards higher education and work. I think people go to college or...

I think you have done very well, Sandura. You might try adding a 'because' clause at the end to explain why you have chosen Tweenty University in particular. And a final short paragraph (sentence) thanking the reader for his/her time and consideration.

Nona The Brit wrote: 1) Can I use "I am keen on.." or is that colloquial language? If so, what other expressions could I use. It's ok. 2) 1 Paragraph: "would match my wishes for my future just perfect" - does this sound right? no, this is incorrect. Try 'would perfectly match my ambitions for...

JayT wrote:Dear MountainHiker: First of All I would like to appreciate you for the previous letter...I'm trying to apply for a new programme and basically I went with the format of the last letter but I think I need to have change completely the fifth paragraph...Could you please review it and...

I got many experiences from a new country, Vietnam. The first time, I knew how big of this country because when I went there by plane, I spent about 2 and a half hour from Phnom Penh to Hanoi, which is a city of Vietnam, so it is very far. Its economic is quite good. For example, its...