In Universities^x, Motivation letters^x

Hi Dung, Nona did an excellent job in helping you with your letter. I am going to throw in a few comments and wait for Nona's comments. 1) You need to be careful of the " ' " marks that I see periodically. Look at the end of your first and third paragraphs. 2) I will quote the paragraph in...

Hi Nona, Very nice to find your helpful..Thanks so much for that... I completely agree in your points, I have just finished my full motivation letter. Please give me a bit your time to recheck it... I do not know how to say, you know I am relly happy ....... Hi mountainHiker, You and Nona...

Nona the Brit, Wow, this is phenomenal help! Dung is going to be very happy with you. Thank you so very much! MountainHiker

Hi, Phew, there is a lot to get hold of here! I think that mountainhiker's suggested structure will work very well for this letter and you have worked hard to make improvements to your original. I think you still need to plan your letter a little more clearly as at the moment it is all a bit...

Hi MountainHiker, :(... sorry at all. Enjoy your leisure time as well sleep well! That 's it for todayI am going to bed. now is 1am..so late and tired. Nice to make relationship with u. bYE BYE.

Hi Dung, You are making excellent progress. It is late afternoon, early evening here. I have some other things to do and then I am going to the gym this evening. But I will look at what you have written tomorrow. What you might want to do is spell check your document. I don't know if you...

Hi friend,I have just finished 3 parts in your guide : That is 1) 2) 3).Please help me to take a look at all! Thanks u very much. Dung Nguyen I am a Vietnamese citizen who are apply for the Bachelor of Liberal of Art 's Degree program in Social Science department at University College...

Dung, In 2, the school has no bearing on your interest. It is simply there. From forms part of the reason why you are curious and interested. And if I recall correctly, you are now living in Holland? So, it would seem to me that your writing the news created an interest in learning more...

Hi MountainHiker, It is difficult to correctly perform in English way. You know, in (2) I want to say why i want to study in that school for a obligation but I do not know how to do it? Do u have any ideas for that?... In (4) you agreed with my point of views, don't u? Keep in touch. Thanks...

Let's keep this as our guide. I suggest the following: 1) Introduction (very quick points) 1a) Who you are 1b) What you want to do 1c) Why do you want to do it 1d) What do you want from them 2) Detailed background 2a) Expand on who you are 3) Detailed background 3a) Expand on what you want to...