Can someone or english teachers check my essay for me?

I wrote an essay about "Neighbors" by Raymond Carver. I tried my best, but I feel I need help to make correction of grammar mistakes and word choosing mistakes. I don't know whether you know about the story, "Neighbors" by

Highlighted a few things that need correcting. Remembered in appearance by his short mustache, dark hair and demanding tone, Adolf Hitler is most notorious for his contributions to the killing of over 6,000,000 Jews. Hitler began rule over

Highlighted a few things that need fixing. First, you should register for courses on the website like the (homepage name) homepage (xx.com) or (software name) program . Then, you will be randomly selected for each class which exceeds your

Hi, Just a very quick comment that the English term is 'obesity'. Clive

This statement is fine. it makes perfect sense

For $1000, I'll make sure it sucks enough that your teacher might think you wrote it. Hey GG I'll pay you double the amount !! But make sure you right a good one, my english doesn't suck

I have to write an essay on obesitas. Could you please check it on grammatical errors, tenses, spelling, sentence structure, coherence,..? Thank you very much! IS OBESITAS REALLY SUCH A BIG PROBLEM? Each day, we are astounded by newspaper

To be honest, I am not crazy about the sound nor construction of the two sentences. If you want someone to help you look at it, I,d suggest these options: This is the essay I wrote. Can you please take a look? I am wondering if you

Sentence 2, by using 'hoping', suggests that it is more important to you that the essay be examined. 'Wondering' is used as a soft word suggesting that it is less important; so that if your wish is declined, the person asked will