In Expressions^x, Paragraphs^x

While the world is focused upon the actions of Muslims who attempted to suppress "freedom of speech", groups of Catholics and the extreme right have recently tried to do the same in Madrid. Being a relatively small action, it seems to have gone unnoticed in the international press." Roughly...

“how about” gives a suggestion or asks someone to consider a possibility. How about taking a walk after dinner? How about expanding on this idea in the second paragraph? How about CJ

Anonymous wrote: Friendship to me is just like a treasure. It is better than having all the money in the world. You could have all the money in the world, no matter what you do. Thats what friendship is to me. A friendship is where you can go out and have a good time no matter where you go...

Hi Sextus, I really just looked at the English, I'm sure your argument is beyond reproach! Clive 1) All OK English. 2) "I shall begin by analyzing Sextus Empiricus’s exposition of the Skeptic’s search for, and attainment of, unperturbedness with the object of showing that he is consistently...

So... I might use "as regards". Or perhaps with this expression I would have the same problem. If this is the case, I could just leave the paragraph as it was... In any case, I could still replace "it" by your suggestion "such skepticism". Sextus

Davkett wrote: Would you consider this?-- As to the kind of modern moral skepticism which denies the existence of objective moral values, Julia Annas has affirmed that it is essentially ‘local’, a term which suggests that such skepticism rests on a contrast between morality and some other view...

It is far too verbose, Javier. Do not use verbiage to fill up space or unduly personalize an essay: an essay is not a one-sided conversation; it is a reasoned, concise and well-prepared statement. Here are your first couple of paragraphs with the unnecessary words edited...

Yes, I think this can work. Then, my whole paragraph would be as follows: "Annas’ remarks regarding the status of science seem not merely to report the fact that contemporary ethical skepticism predominantly adopts a non-skeptical attitude towards science, but to attempt to show that it is not...

Hiya Sheena,Let me give it a try and I hope I'll be of good counsel... *** is a girl involved in multiple tasks, she could manage both her studies and her work life, she wanted to work at the same time she studied in college to take the best advantage of her time, and apply her academic...

Hiya Feb, Let me give you my impressions on your essay. I'd like to limit to the first part, since I'm running out of time today. I've put together some comments, paragraph after paragraph, see below. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- I believe that...