Hi, (1) Peter and John's hobby is playing football. One day, his friends decided to play in the park, so Peter brought along the football with his friends. They played together delight ed ly . (2) Peter's hobby is playing football

Thanks for your comments, I try it again: (1) Peter and John's hobby is playing football. One day, his friends decided to play in the park, so Peter brought along the football with his friends. They played together delightly . (2)

Can I say, (1) They laughed at the monkey. It had taken the ball because it wanted to join the game. At the end, they enjoyed the game with the monkey together. (2) They laughed at the monkey. It gave back the ball it had taken to Peter. So

Can I say, (1) They laughed at the monkey because the ball was taken by it. After a few minutes, the monkey had joined the game. (2) Its action was funny . They laughed at the monkey. Later, it took the football and gave it to Peter. it joined

Hi Vincent, Your sentences contain a lot of repetition. eg they decided to the park to play football. They played football happily. This is very unnatural. To tell you the truth, it sounds very childish. Some people would even be

Can I say, (1) Peter and his friends were playing happily. Suddenly, a monkey jumped out from / jumped down from the tree . He grabbed the football and ran away. They felt surprised to see the monkey. (2) While they were playing, a monkey jumped

Can I say, (1) Peter and John's hobby is playing football. One day, his friends decided to play football in the park, so Peter brought along the football with his friends. They played together delightly . (2) Peter's hobby is playing

The match against Brazil provoked great interest among football fans after the welcome transfer of the Italian player to our team. The player assured his team of victory deep into overtime.

Dear friends! Please, correct these sentences. Thanks for your help. The match against Brazilian team provoked huge interest among football fans after the most desirable transfer of the player from Italian club to hnative team was completed.

How u doing, sorry for not replying ur thread for over 4 months, i've been doing my thesis since the beginning of the year, now I handed in my first draft, waiting for the feedbacks from my prof. I only saw cricket on TV, I dont think peope