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Nona The Brit wrote: This is quite long? Perhaps you need to cut it down a little bit. If you put in too much shameless self-promotion then it is obvious that the letter was written by you rather than your company. Companies tend to take a dry attitude to these things. EXPERIENCE...

I have reviewed your letter again, with suggested changes in bold. I cannot follow all your colours and interjections, so I have merely amended as I think best (and some of them are improvements on my own previous suggestions):Program Code: MKT2345 February 2, 2008 Dear Sir/Madam: I am...

Thankyou very much Mister Micawber! The revised letter is as following after your suggested changes. and few additions from myside. I applied for three diffenent Master programs. International Marketing, Leadership Management and Entrepreneurship & Innovation. Some Paras need to be customised...

I have struck out unnecessary or inappropriate verbiage, made some corrections (in bold). You may also have to fix the sentence structure to correct for my deletions.February 2, 2008 Director of the Program Department of ABC University of ABC Dear Dr Smith:I am writing to apply for the Master’s...

I AM SENDING THE MOTIVATION LETTER AFTER 2-3 DAYS! PLS GIVE YOUR COMMENTS TO MAKE IT ACCURATE N PERFECT! THIS FORUM IS DOIN A GREAT JOB!.... JUST WELDONE! Director of the Program Department of ABC University of ABC February 2, 2008 I am writing to apply for the Master’s Programme in ***. ...

The following is a supporting paragraph in an essay "Why do people attend college". I think the last sentence is not coherent with the topic. If omitting it, i think the passage will be too short. How to do? Thank you! Next, more education means more money. According to the US Census...

Hi I need to write a Promotion Banner for a exclusive brand of Audio Products. They are launching this new product during Christmas and NewYear 2008. Visuals are almost decided. i.e Product is wrapped as a Gift and then next Shot the New Product is unwrapped..and then the Audio .. should say...

Grammar Geek wrote: Write the words that you would like to say to him in person. Once you have those words, you have a draft of your letter. Post it here and people can take a look. We can't write the letter for you, because we don't know what it is he did and what you want to say thank you...

Hi, Can you help me to write a wouderful letter to my Boss thanking him about all the opportunities provided to me (study, Courses, promotion...). I will be so glad if you can help me. Regards, Reetha Shetty

Write the words that you would like to say to him in person. Once you have those words, you have a draft of your letter. Post it here and people can take a look. We can't write the letter for you, because we don't know what it is he did and what you want to say thank you for.