. Hello smn, and welcome to English Forums. You need to do a little proofreading yourself before submitting such a letter. Please review your letter and supply capital letters where appropriate. For instance, ' D ear '. .

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Hello, I was reading " Forging a New Vision of America's Melting Pot " by Gregory Rodriguez from the New American Foundation. 1) WHILE visiting Ellis Island at the turn of the 20th century, Henry James wondered how the sweeping tide

I work for an online editing and proofreading service. Please see my profile for more info. Here's how I would revise your paragraph Attending the University of *** is not my only goal, but the first in many goals I have. At the university, I

Thank you Clive and Avangi for your quick replies. The "European countries" part was really useful. I'll leave it as it is. Regarding the "resolved" part - I am only proofreading and can't change the meaning much...I

I work for an online editing and proofreading service. Please see my profile for more info. I won't revise your whole essay here, but I will show you the changes I would make in the first paragraph. When humans battle one another they are at

Hi,everyone. When we ask others what their preference is, we ask, "Which do you like better, A or B?" My question is: Can we change reorganize the sentence and say "A or B, which do you like better?" Are these two variations

I work for an online editing and proofreading service. Please see my profile for more info. I won't go through the whole letter here, but I will show you how I would revise the first paragraph. Dear __ __: Although I am grateful for the

Please correct any grammer in the following. The heart is one of the most important organs of the body. The structure and organization can be of interest. The heart about the size of a fist is located between the two lungs of the thoracic cavity.

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