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Hi, nona the brit, Thank you so much for your kind time. Your suggestion is very helpful, I have realized the problem, too. No one would feel like reading such a long letter. You said in the reply that don’t repeat the same information in the CV, so first of all, shall I delete paragraph -what...

Dear all, I am a new user and I found here by chance when I tried to get some guidance of letter writing. I have read a lot of examples together with the comments, as well as the helpful posts of suggestions from MountainHiker. I would like to thank all the members for producing such a great ...

Dear MountainHiker: Hope to be safe and sound. 1)I corrected the capitalization. 2)In the third paragraph, Although made it very long paragraph, I tried to expalin enough. 3)you asked me to add the information in the Sixth paragraph to the fifth one...don't you think it would make the fifth...

Dear mountainHiker: I did better. please take a look at that now and tell me should I take paragraphs two and seven out of my letter? now, the general format of the letter is correct or not? Best regards, Jay...

Jay, The problems you are encountering have little or nothing to do with English. Your ability to write English sentences is strong. You problem is with organization. Please think about my comments, take some time, and then provide a new version. MountainHiker January 3rd, 2005 Dear...

Dear MountainHiker: I did the changes as you recommended... To make it clear for you, I have not completed MBA programme in US, but I worked in best financial organization in US. as I told you earlier, I left US two years ago and since then I didn't speak English and as you know lack of practice...

Manager of the Program Division of Industrial Marketing & e-Commerce XXX State University January 3rd, 2005 Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing to apply for the Master’s Program in e-Commerce. I think one of my most distinguishing characteristics is the diversity of experiences I possess....

Dear MountainHiker: I corrected as you asked me and also tried to add more confidence to the letter now considering this:A personal letter explaining why you want to join this programme and what you expect from your studies at XXX University. Could you please go through the letter and tell me...

Dear MontainHiker: I'm going to apply for a master's degree in e-commerce. the school asked me to write: A personal letter explaining why you want to join this programme and what you expect from your studies at XXX University. Although I have lived in US for 4 years, but since I...

'To have one's nose sliced open' means that someone else has cut one's nose down the middle with a knife. It would be curious if the Viking Theory were true. 'To pay through the nose' means 'to pay too much'. It seems however that those whose noses were 'sliced open' had paid nothing at all....