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Actually I just want you to correct the grammar, sentence structures and check if the sentences sound OK. If a sentence is awkward, please suggest a better one.

I am sorry I will not be able to help you on this essay because I don' t know what Toefl expects. The only thing I heard is that they(teachers I mean) love advanced words and linkings.

This is one of the topics from the TOEFL writing topics.

What kind of essay this is?

Topic: "People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer." For people who have already finished...

thz for your help, Feebs11!!!!!

NC7 wrote:Reasons for people to attend college or university are various and depend on one’s attitudes. But the three most important ones that make people choose college or university as the gate to their future are job opportunities, increased knowledge and essential skills preparation for...

Reasons for people to attend college or university are various and depend on one’s attitudes. But the three most important ones that make people choose college or university as the gate to their future are job opportunities, increased knowledge and essential skills preparation for future...

NC7 wrote:Reasons for people to attend college or university are various and depend on one’s attitudes. But the three most important ones that make people choose college or university as the gate to their future are job opportunities, increased knowledge and essential skills preparation for...

Reasons for people to attend college or university are various and depend on one’s attitudes. But the three most important ones that make people choose college or university as the gate to their future are job opportunities, increased knowledge and essential skills preparation for future...