Julielai: I appreciate your help very much, but I din't how to replace the parts you pointed out. At this point is a little late since I have to send it tomorrow (tuesday) , and I still have an application to complete. Do you think that the

Although, they had arrived at the cemetery 10 minutes ago, it seemed like an eternity. To worsen the situation, the day was rainy, which made everything look more depressing (*you're telling and not showing --often happens when you use an

Hello: I wrote a short story for my college application. The instructions say that emphasis should be placed on describing the scene and developing the characters. Can anyone please read it and tell me if it is ok or if there is any

Question: what's the assignment about? Just the glaring errors. In this play, written by Oscar Wilde, we find different views on marriage. At the very beginning, for example, we see Algernon and his servant Lane talking about this topic.

Lupa, This is correct, not wrong. About thirty years ago (the time of "traditional rules"!) the only correct form according to grammar books was "With whom did Carol go?". Since then grammarians have admitted defeat, so to speak, and grammar

Malory, I don't think I can give you a response different from the one I posted to the WHO/WHOM/WHOSE thread... because that's what I know about these words! ~L~ "who" will be the subject of a clause (nominative form), while "whom" will be the

Andrei- The only rule I can think of about sentences of this type is that the prepositional phrases that answer 'where', 'with whom', and 'about what' should be after the verb. The 'when' phrase may even go at the beginning of the sentence. Ex.

Who, whom and whose are relative pronouns. Who and whom are used for persons. They introduce relative clauses postmodifying the head of a noun phrase, and they are identical in form with interrogative pronouns but function differently. Who:

On Friendship By Margaret Mead and Rhoda Metraux Few Americans stay put for a lifetime. We move from town to city to suburb, from high school to college in a different state, from a job in one region to a better job elsewhere, from the home

Dear Andrewdust: As I promised, I have reviewed your short story and taken the liberty of making suggested corrections. Again, I want to congratulate you on a well written document. You have real talent that you should continue to develop. I