Hi, I see that you only want the grammar checked. Howver, I'd like to try to help you by a brief comment on the structure. You have written almost everything in one very big paragraph. Where I live, many employers will not even bother to

Hi, I would appreciate if you would correct my essay, consisting of a cover letter. Bear in mind that it is only an exercise, and therefore that only grammar should be checked. Please do not hesitate to give me tips or such, to improve my

Please kind revise me about my cover letter for marketing postion as below : 111/33 bkk HR Department ABB Company bkk Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to apply for the marketing Executive position in response to

hi all, i am going to send my cover letter out in a minute, and wld like to know if "your organisation and I" or "your organisation and me " is correct?

Bla, bla, bla With this letter I would like to explain my motivation for an internship at your company. I graduated from Technical University of Moldova; Computers, Informatics and Microelectronics Faculty in July 2007 where I obtained a degree in

Hi Clive, I would like to brother you again about my cover letter I am writing to apply a job for maketing positiom please see and revise me about this. 11/2 L.P Road BKK 11 May , 2009 HR Department Uniriver

Hi, Here is some advice about your cover letter. Your second paragraph seems to repeat too many of the details that should just be in your resume. Remove most of this, and just focus on your skills that you think are important for the

Hi Clive, I come from Thailand,Here,the resume is attached along with cover letter. I think, the cover letter could provide information more resume such as my passion,opinion etc. that I do not mention in my resume. Could u plese

I would like to write my cover letter to apply some jobs, Please kindly revise this cover letter,thank you so much for your comment,recoomendation. 444 abc Rd. , cc.bb 25 April,2009 Dear sir, Your advertisement on the website

Oliver: There's an opening on my staff and something tells me you'd be perfect for it. It seems to me there's more to your story than you write on yor cover letter. Jimmy: Unfortunately what you see is what you get. I'm a mediocre