Another version : Dear Sir or Madam, I am applying for the Postgraduate Diploma of Information Technology Management, as my first step in pursuing the Master of Management in Information Technology. My educational history was not really complete.

OK, how about this : Dear Sir or Madam, I am applying for the Postgraduate Diploma of Information Technology Management, as my first step in pursuing the Master of Management in Information Technology. My educational history was not really

Hi everybody, I have to write a letter of motivation for applying to a master program in business. I read some good letters in this forum and tried my best to write a letter myself. It woud be very helpful to get some feedback what you think about

I'm gradueted for Law and language and will apply for European Master "Global Studies - A European Perspective.They asked for a motivation letter,can any 1 give me a sample or template

Thanks RayH for your suggestions. I have reworked my statement into : Dear Sir or Madam, I am applying for the Postgraduate Diploma of Information Technology Management, as my first step in pursuing the Master of Management in Information

ALright, you're using totally inapropriate language. I mean WHAT you write is fine, but you have to represent the facts in more sophisticated way. Check out some really good personal statements on economy and finance: Go on

Hello! I need to write my motivation letter more interesting to call attention to the reader. It is really neccessary for me to get a traineeship, because this is a requirement to study my desirable course of studies. Please help me to attract

Hello! Can u please check my motivation letter?  Thank you!!! Throughout my secondary education , I have been mostly interested in Mathematics and Economy. My dream was to be able to study in UK in order to get the best education in Economics and

Anything wrong with the above letter ? Thanks for your advice.

Dear friends, Please correct my Motivation letter with your kind heart as soon as possible for which I shall be grateful to you. my mail id is --- best wishes MOTIVATION LETTER I am student of fifth year of engineering faculty of xxxUniversity