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I'm not sure if this is supposed to be a book review or an essay on single parenting. If you have been asked to present your own personal views on the issue, ok, but if you have been asked to write an essay examining the issue you are being very one-sided and you need to look also at the...

Hi. There are a lot of things here that need to be corrected, and I'm not sure where to start. Try starting with this: My dream job is to work in the Information Technology field as a software programmer. Some of the reasons I've chosen this career are ... Now, before you try to...

Hic, No one correct this essay for a long time. I really need it fixed so please help me to correct other paragraphs

Oh, ur 1st paragraph is delicious^^. It's better than mine. Thanks a lot. So, how 're other paragraph?. I feel a bit difficult to say more in the conclusion paragraph. Any idea to say more to impress someone at the last paragraph?Help me, please. I appreciate your effort helps.^^

I need to write 5 narrative paragraoh essay for my english class.could everyone help check my grammar and sentences..pls. point out any mistake that i make..i will really appreciate all the help..^^ A Memorable Childhood Experience by: Nghia Vo Do you have a...

hey i tried to coerrect ur essay alittle here it goes: i found the second supporting paragraph a little bit weird :s if u could explain it to me evethoug i tried to correct it or maybe to change ideas plus the second is not that long :S maybe its because there is not to much idea for that...

Uhm can you tell me more about it? I dont really know what you mean

First and third essay: I suggest you state your position in the first paragraph.

You need to break your essay down into paragraphs. Your first "sentence" is missing a verb. You need commas here and there. For example: Even though it may be a comedy , it does have the human elements that we all go through every day of our lives.

You can compare something with another thing or contrast something with another thing (this can be person or object too) or you can both compare and contrast in your essay. There are two patterns for this kind of essay; block by block and point by point. Block by block: You compare or...