Hi. Why did you put a comma after the "thus" in the first sentence, and not use a comma after the "Then" in the second sentence. I must say that the two sentences are different in structure. My sentences with your correction:

. Nice letter! (Please omit the first bold phrase I have inserted if it is not accurate): Dear ***, I just wanted to congratulate you on your promotion and thank you for everything that you have done for me over the past two years. I really

There are a lot of those "ball" expressions, which I assume are sports related. They're all old as the hills, and I know how to use them; but now that you ask, I can't figure their origins. He has a lot on the ball. He's

Hi Fizzi, X states that it approves and rejects promotion s relating to vitamins. I assume X is some kind of regulatory body. 'Relating to vitamins' seems loosely worded to me. 'X states that' suggests, to me, some caution on the

Hi all, How is my English? X states that it approves and rejects promotion relating to vitamins. Regards, Fizzi

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. Dear Carol, I just want to express my appreciation to you and Dave for the unexpected promotion. I am grateful for the recognition, and this has revitalized my enthusiasm for a job that I already enjoy. I continue to love what I do, and this

Please provide your guidance on the letter below I would like to send to my supervisor within the next day or two. Thank you. Dear Carol, I just want to express my appreciation to you and Dave, for the unexpected promotion notification today. I

Hi, I was just called by my immediate boss and told I should apologize in letter form to his boss. Backstory: I've been reviewed for promotion by immediate boss and was sent to an interview to his boss (D.O.). The interview was in a rather big

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