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My assignment is to type a Descriptive/Informative Essay. I am graded 50% on content, 40% on grammar and mechanics, and 10% on style. Could anyone read my essay and suggest some corrections? Please bold or make corrections visible. The help will be greatly appreciated. Here are grammatical errors...

Hello Anon (MN?) and YoHF, YoHF’s re-draft is excellent, with a very good style. You should try and follow the style and rhythm of the English. In case you look at it too closely, there are a couple of minor errors in it which I show below. As no-one else has replied to you regarding your...

It's now called The McGraw-Hill College Handbook See below. From McGraw-Hill's webpage. There's been some cut & pasting from the old edition but the song remains the same -:) The McGraw-Hill College Handbook Compositions Author(s): Richard Marius Harvey Wiener ISBN: 007040481X...