By Application letters, Abbreviations

First, capitalize the word I and other proper nouns, and then rewrite this without using abbreviations, and spell August correctly - then we can worry about grammar and syntax.

Manager of LLM Program (I doubt it is a manager. You need to check the title.) Faculty of Law XXX University January 10th, 2005 Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing to apply for the LLM (I would not use an abbrevation here. I tend use abbreviations sparingly.) programme. After the admission to...